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my first flash website ever. so take it easy:D
i hope everyone likes it. i might stil tweek a little on it here and there so comment's are appreciated and fav's too!
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whozZy94 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2011  Hobbyist Interface Designer
eszméletlen jó, kidolgozott;)
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alledesign Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is amazing. Love tigers! :-)
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dst5216 Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2010  Student Interface Designer
thanks me too:D
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Owhl Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2010
Beautiful work! It is very nice.

There are many spelling/grammar mistakes is my only problem - fix those and you're golden! =p
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dst5216 Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2010  Student Interface Designer
was just to practice flash on it:D didn't take much care on the spelling though:/
to lazy to fix it, cause I'll make something better in the future anyway.
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Owhl Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2010
Well its very professional-looking ... awesome work, keep it up!
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Rahzizzle Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2010  Professional Interface Designer
like it, the fade out effect should be faster IMO because if you click links fast it lags behind. FYI, when you want to talk about creating an entirety of something, it's spelled "whole" . A "Hole" is what's in the center of a donut
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mofftarkin Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2010
Hey, since I can't write a critique I'll try to do so in a comment. I hope you'll appreciate that.

One thing that bothers me here is filesize - 1.6 MB . There's nothing here that could make it that high, except tons of rasterized graphics.
Take a look at :thumb169795562: - it's only 300 KB - almost everything is made out of vectors.

Flames are nice, yet when you see flash, you basically expect some movement - they could simply be glowing or something.

Fonts - I know you wanted them to look fancy and cool - that's fine - really, but no matter what you have to make them easly readable. Try putting a 1px shadow behind them at 125 degrees (45 degrees in Flash) - you'll notice huge difference.

Navigation - try navigate really fast - before your text-replace animation finishes - you'll notice that it's a little buggy. When I didn't know ActionScript that much as I do now, I used to make animations fast enough to minimize that effect, so most people wouldn't notice that. Try it :)

Pre-loader - why completely zero text and white background? Try adding some info to let someone know that he's on the right page - and after loader reaches 100% it launches an animation to fade from white to your website - it's really easy - and most people would consider this as an intro.

I am aware that it may look like me being a jerk and picking on everything to just jerk around - but I am convienced that it'll give you a lot more than hearing "Yeah, it's great" etc.

Anyway, keep it up, as your work is good, and can be better if you train your skills :)

Greets.
Moffy
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dst5216 Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2010  Student Interface Designer
thanks for taking time to comment me in this length:D
as i earlier stated it's just the first, never coded any website before.
and didn't know how to make movement inside the website. just banners.

all in all i had alot of trouble but atleast i know now how to make pages:D
next time expect something cool!:D

and about the text color's, can't dissagree about that:D it's crap:D

anyways, thanks alot!:D
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mofftarkin Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2010
by that thumb (which I don't know why doesn't appear) I meant this deviation of mine: [link]
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dst5216 Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2010  Student Interface Designer
damn, that looks sick. problem is. i don't know enough about flash to make something like that :/
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Nachtrae Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Looks very nice! :D I really like the design. Maybe you could add in a little animation in the background with the fire or the eyes of the tiger. Also, I suggest you take a different text color. It's kinda difficult to read.
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dst5216 Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2010  Student Interface Designer
yeah i thought about it, but i have to learn how to do it first.:D
i know how to make banners and now practicing hole websites.
still need to figure out how to do ''intro-like'' things.
you know...

btw about the color, an great painter said i should try mixing turqoise with orange:P
so i did:D
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Nachtrae Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You managed to mix turquoise and orange pretty well, though if you make a website, the text should always be easy to read. If not, people will leave and you don't want that with a pretty design like this. ;)

As for the intro, you could insert several frames in front of the home page and put an animation there. Name the keyframes and code carefully, so you get there only once. You could also try a different scene, but I'm not sure how and if that would work.
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dst5216 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2010  Student Interface Designer
yeah i should make the text a little brighter.

about the intro, ahh:D still have to get there. something's i know, some i don't:D but i'll get there!
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Nachtrae Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Lots of tutorials and stuff on the net. You just have to take a look around ;) I'm sure this'll look awesome when it's completely finished.
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dst5216 Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2010  Student Interface Designer
to be honest i dont like it that mutch.
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Nachtrae Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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Shoo, it looks awesome! Just a few thingies and it will look even more awesome :meow:
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dst5216 Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2010  Student Interface Designer
just a quick practice with flash
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neekzy Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2010
nagyon jó :) elsőre, meg zseniális. csak kicsit lassan vált az oldalak közt, de fasza! :D
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dst5216 Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2010  Student Interface Designer
kossz, amugy igazad van kicsit lasan valtogat. de ez csak az elso:D
jovobe csinalok jobbat!:D
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