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my first flash website ever. so take it easy:D
i hope everyone likes it. i might stil tweek a little on it here and there so comment's are appreciated and fav's too!
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whozZy94 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2011  Hobbyist Interface Designer
eszméletlen jó, kidolgozott;)
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alledesign Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is amazing. Love tigers! :-)
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dst5216 Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2010  Student Interface Designer
thanks me too:D
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Owhl Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2010
Beautiful work! It is very nice.

There are many spelling/grammar mistakes is my only problem - fix those and you're golden! =p
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dst5216 Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2010  Student Interface Designer
was just to practice flash on it:D didn't take much care on the spelling though:/
to lazy to fix it, cause I'll make something better in the future anyway.
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Owhl Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2010
Well its very professional-looking ... awesome work, keep it up!
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Rahzizzle Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2010  Professional Interface Designer
like it, the fade out effect should be faster IMO because if you click links fast it lags behind. FYI, when you want to talk about creating an entirety of something, it's spelled "whole" . A "Hole" is what's in the center of a donut
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mofftarkin Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2010
Hey, since I can't write a critique I'll try to do so in a comment. I hope you'll appreciate that.

One thing that bothers me here is filesize - 1.6 MB . There's nothing here that could make it that high, except tons of rasterized graphics.
Take a look at :thumb169795562: - it's only 300 KB - almost everything is made out of vectors.

Flames are nice, yet when you see flash, you basically expect some movement - they could simply be glowing or something.

Fonts - I know you wanted them to look fancy and cool - that's fine - really, but no matter what you have to make them easly readable. Try putting a 1px shadow behind them at 125 degrees (45 degrees in Flash) - you'll notice huge difference.

Navigation - try navigate really fast - before your text-replace animation finishes - you'll notice that it's a little buggy. When I didn't know ActionScript that much as I do now, I used to make animations fast enough to minimize that effect, so most people wouldn't notice that. Try it :)

Pre-loader - why completely zero text and white background? Try adding some info to let someone know that he's on the right page - and after loader reaches 100% it launches an animation to fade from white to your website - it's really easy - and most people would consider this as an intro.

I am aware that it may look like me being a jerk and picking on everything to just jerk around - but I am convienced that it'll give you a lot more than hearing "Yeah, it's great" etc.

Anyway, keep it up, as your work is good, and can be better if you train your skills :)

Greets.
Moffy
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dst5216 Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2010  Student Interface Designer
thanks for taking time to comment me in this length:D
as i earlier stated it's just the first, never coded any website before.
and didn't know how to make movement inside the website. just banners.

all in all i had alot of trouble but atleast i know now how to make pages:D
next time expect something cool!:D

and about the text color's, can't dissagree about that:D it's crap:D

anyways, thanks alot!:D
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mofftarkin Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2010
by that thumb (which I don't know why doesn't appear) I meant this deviation of mine: [link]
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